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Dear my friend
ICHA
Hello, how are you..? I am and my family is OK. In my letter I want to tell you about my experience. Last month, I and my family went to Surabaya Zoo.
We went to Surabaya Zoo at 08.00 o'clock. Entrance fee per person Rp. 10.000. There were so many kinds of animals, are monkey, elephant, giraffe etc.
I and my family were very happy in Surabaya Zoo because, we got a new experience of animals in here.
At 13.00 o'clok, we rested, prayed, and eat. After that, we went on a trip to see animals.
At 16.00 o'clock, we go home by car, and we feel tired at all, but the trip was really fun.
That's all please reply my letter, God bless you.
From your friend
ASTARI
ICHA
Hello, how are you..? I am and my family is OK. In my letter I want to tell you about my experience. Last month, I and my family went to Surabaya Zoo.
We went to Surabaya Zoo at 08.00 o'clock. Entrance fee per person Rp. 10.000. There were so many kinds of animals, are monkey, elephant, giraffe etc.
I and my family were very happy in Surabaya Zoo because, we got a new experience of animals in here.
At 13.00 o'clok, we rested, prayed, and eat. After that, we went on a trip to see animals.
At 16.00 o'clock, we go home by car, and we feel tired at all, but the trip was really fun.
That's all please reply my letter, God bless you.
From your friend
ASTARI
9 November 2011 pukul 20.17
12 November 2011 pukul 22.05
some correction for u :
- We go to Surabaya Zoo -> We went to Sby...
- There are so many kinds of animals -> There were
- I and my family is very happy-> I and my fmly
were very happy
- we rest, pray, and eat-> we rested,prayed n ate
Ok, you can rewrite the words. You get 80.